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Your Grace Is A Song
#1
Your Grace Is A Song

Verse 1

Lord, I can't escape
Your warm embrace
It's making me whole
It's saving my soul
Your gentle voice
Cuts through the noise
I'm led by every word
I'm fed by what is heard

Pre-Chorus

Oh Lord, I'm amazed
Of all You do
I know I can't repay
But here's my song to You

Chorus 

Here's my song 
My offering
For all that You've done
And all that You're doing
Every word
My heart sings
Of the grace.... (of the grace)
Of the grace 
That You've given me

Verse 2 

Lord, come what may
Your love won't change
Your grace and your mercy
Will never desert me
You'll always be
Here with me
Through the valleys and storms
I'm safe in Your arms

Chorus 

Bridge

Lord, Your grace is a song
Lord, Your grace is a song
Lord, Your grace is a song
For me
Lord, Your grace is a song
Lord, Your grace is a song
Lord, Your grace is a song
For me to sing

Chorus
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#2
Hi Square Elvis

Your Grace Is Enough

Thats a song everybody sings..............
so I think you need to rewrite this

It might have a different melody
I am sure to you it is a different song
but those words, those lyrics
are pretty firm in most Worshippers and especially Christian Songwriters minds and hearts.
Honestly, I can't even read the words without the song singing in my head
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8wN-fspKg1Q
so sorry

Can you find another way to say it?

Love you
just my 2 cents

(Hope this crit does not come across as too harsh
but I know you can find another way to say it)

Blessings
ang
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#3
(04-26-2017, 01:42 PM)angela Wrote: Hi Square Elvis

Your Grace Is Enough

Thats a song everybody sings..............
so I think you need to rewrite this

It might have a different melody
I am sure to you it is a different song
but those words, those lyrics
are pretty firm in most Worshippers and especially Christian Songwriters minds and hearts.
Honestly, I can't even read the words without the song singing in my head
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8wN-fspKg1Q
so sorry

Can you find another way to say it?

Love you
just my 2 cents

(Hope this crit does not come across as too harsh
but I know you can find another way to say it)

Blessings
ang

So sorry you didn't like it or had a problem reading it Ang. I was only singing and writing what God gives me. As for grace being used a lot on worship songs, to me grace is good. Especially a lot of it. Smile
I try to write and sing what God gives me first. Then try to tweek it if suggestions or I feel God telling me to change things. I am a different writer than most. I only grab my guitar when God tells me to write. Can I write a song without God.... yes. But His message is what I want to hear. That's just me. Thanks for taking the time to write yours comment. Many blessings...
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#4
Hi Square Elvis!

It is very important that you write and share what God gives you. I don't want to discourage you. Please continue to write.
and continue to tweak as the Lord leads

my comments are always JUST my comments to keep or sweep
so sweep it away, and continue to praise

Blessings
ang Smile
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#5
(05-12-2017, 08:03 AM)angela Wrote: Hi Square Elvis!

It is very important that you write and share what God gives you. I don't want to discourage you. Please continue to write.
and continue to tweak as the Lord leads

my comments are always JUST my comments to keep or sweep
so sweep it away, and continue to praise

Blessings
ang Smile



Hi Elvis...how about re-titling as "Your Grace is the Song" leaving verses and chorus as you have them...then your bridge would possibly go like this...

Lord, Your grace is the song
Lord, Your grace is the song
Lord, Your grace is the song
For me

Lord, Your grace is the song
Lord, Your grace is the song
Lord, Your grace is the song
For me to sing
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#6
(05-20-2017, 11:20 AM)novice62 Wrote:
(05-12-2017, 08:03 AM)angela Wrote: Hi Square Elvis!

It is very important that you write and share what God gives you. I don't want to discourage you. Please continue to write.
and continue to tweak as the Lord leads

my comments are always JUST my comments to keep or sweep
so sweep it away, and continue to praise

Blessings
ang Smile


Hi Elvis...how about re-titling as "Your Grace is the Song" leaving verses and chorus as you have them...then your bridge would possibly go like this...

Lord, Your grace is the song
Lord, Your grace is the song
Lord, Your grace is the song
For me

Lord, Your grace is the song
Lord, Your grace is the song
Lord, Your grace is the song
For me to sing

I love it!!!! Thank you so much for looking at it through a different set of eyes. I have changed it above. Thanks again!!!
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#7
YES!
Loving it too!
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