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God who created it all
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God Who Created It All

Breathe, breathe another breath
You can say there is no reason
But your lungs still pull the air
Believing there is nothing 
Is a lonely way to live

Look into the heavens
Beyond many distant suns
You'll only find one answer
That makes any sense at all
Everything created
By the God who created it all

Listen, listen with your mind
The thoughts that fill your head
Have meaning for a reason
Touch, touch what you can see
This something came from nothing
It all came from the word

Look into the heavens
Beyond many distant suns
You'll only find one answer
That makes any sense at all
Everything created
By the God who created it all
Michael
Keep refining your craft just as Jesus refines us.
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#2
Great concept Michael! Would love to hear what you are thinking in terms of melody?
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(02-22-2017, 09:55 AM)AprilAudio Wrote: Great concept Michael! Would love to hear what you are thinking in terms of melody?

No ideas for a melody.  This is just what I call just letting the words come out.  From here I usually start cleaning up the idea and if a melody comes to mind I start working it and the lyrics together.  I anyone would like to work on this feel free.  I love to collaborate ideas.  I come up with a lot more music ideas than I do lyrics.  If anyone is looking for music to work lyrics into let me know, I have lots of ideas recorded.
Michael
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(02-22-2017, 11:26 PM)Michael Ford Wrote:
(02-22-2017, 09:55 AM)AprilAudio Wrote: Great concept Michael! Would love to hear what you are thinking in terms of melody?

No ideas for a melody.  This is just what I call just letting the words come out.  From here I usually start cleaning up the idea and if a melody comes to mind I start working it and the lyrics together.  I anyone would like to work on this feel free.  I love to collaborate ideas.  I come up with a lot more music ideas than I do lyrics.  If anyone is looking for music to work lyrics into let me know, I have lots of ideas recorded.

I was listening to Ravi Zacharias and he was talking about those who don't believe in God and believe there is no reason for their existence, that we just exist.  That is what I would like to speak to in the lyrics.
Michael
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#5
I absolutely love the way the verses start with the repetitiveness of the first word, "Breathe, breather." I think that adds character to the song. "I love the last lines of the chorus, "This something came from nothing, It all came from the word," very powerful! Can't wait to hear this paired with a convincing melody.
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(02-21-2017, 10:00 PM)Michael Ford Wrote: An up date on the lyrics.  Worked on making the metering of syllables the same in the lines.  It seems to flow better now.

God Who Created It All

Breathe, breathe another breath
You say there is no reason
But your lungs still pull the air
Believing there is nothing 
Is a lonely way to live

Look into the heavens
Beyond many distant suns
You'll only find one answer
That makes any sense at all
Everything is created
By God who created all

Listen, listen with your mind
The thoughts that run through your head
Have meaning for a reason
Touch, touch all that you can see
This something came from nothing
It all came from His living word

Look into the heavens
Beyond many distant suns
You'll only find one answer
That makes any sense at all
Everything is created
By God who created it all
Michael
Keep refining your craft just as Jesus refines us.
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(03-05-2017, 10:12 PM)Michael Ford Wrote:
(02-21-2017, 10:00 PM)Michael Ford Wrote: Another up date on the lyrics.  Worked on making the metering of syllables the same in the lines.  It seems to flow better now.

God Who Created It All
Any ideas for the bridge?


Breathe, breathe another breath. 
You say there is no reason, 
But your lungs still pull the air
Believing there is nothing, 
Is a lonely way to live
 
Chorus
Look into the heavens, 
Beyond many distant suns
You'll only find one answer, 
That makes any sense at all
Everything is created, 
By God who created all
 
 
Listen, listen with your mind
The thoughts that run through your head, 
Have meaning for a reason
You’re not formed from randomness, 
You came from His living word
 
Chorus
Look into the heavens, 
Beyond many distant suns
You'll only find one answer, 
That makes any sense at all
Everything is created, 
By God who created it all
 
 
Bridge
 
Touch, touch all that you can see
 
Smell, smell ???????
 
Hear, hear ???????
 
See, see ?????
 
 
Chorus
Michael
Keep refining your craft just as Jesus refines us.
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#8
1) I would not repeat "all" in the chorus
Look into the heavens,
Beyond many distant suns
You'll only find one answer,
That makes sense of it all
Everything is created by God.

2)Bridge idea
Touch, touch the unseen
Smell the incense on the breeze
Hear, hear the angels sing
See, see visions & dreams

3) I would be happy to send you a vocal reference if you don't mind sharing your e-mail with me Smile
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