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Faithfullness Rescues Me
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DT097nW2Fqg

Here is the most recent song I have written, a couple of weeks ago.

I recorded this using Logic Pro.  I am not a vocalist so these are definitely scratch vocals, but hopefully the idea is there.

Thanks for your feedback

Brett Elms
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#2
Nice work Brett! I think you have a great concept here and a lovely melody!
Andy McCann

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#3
Hello Brett,

I like the melody line and lyrics from what I hear.

You are off to a great start Smile

Bob
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#4
Nice song. Nice message. The last line of the second Verse seems a bit of a stretch for me, it justo sounds out of place. "If I can't struggle across"?
But beautiful piano melody.
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