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Make A Joyful Noise (Psalm 100)
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 ALL:  Here's one that can use the benefit of your recommendations and proposed edits ...it is intended as a congregational hymn   CVCVC ......Thank you!  Neil

See far below for latest version for critique and recommendations.......short Psalm...short song....Thanks,  Neil



Make A Joyful Noise (Psalm 100)


Chorus:

Make a joyful noise to the Lord
Sing out for all He’s worth

His love endures forever
So shout O all the earth!

Verse 1:

Let’s serve Lord Jehovah in gladness
Come into His presence in song
Jehovah God has made us
We're sheep and to Him we belong
  

Chorus

Verse 2:

Come, enter His gates with your praises
Give thanks to Jehovah's name
His faithfulness continues
To each generation the same.
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I love it. I would personally drop "Jehovah" from the first line of Verse 1. It makes the words on the line fit better and makes Jehova on the third line more special. Add the before Lord. "Let's serve the Lord in gladness." Chorus is sweet and simple! You should totally write a few more verses!
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Noah, thanks...here's another version...

Make a Joyful Noise (Psalm 100)
 
Chorus:
 
Make a joyful noise to the Lord
Sing out for all He’s worth
His mercy's everlasting
So shout O all you earth!
 
Verse 1:
 
Let’s serve our Shepherd with gladness
Whose flock we sheep belong
We’re people of His pastures
Come into His presence in song
 
Chorus
 
Verse 2:
 
Extol the Lord in your worship
Resound with all your voice
For steadfast grace and goodness
Let tongues celebrate and rejoice
 

Chorus
 
Verse 3:
 
Come in His gates
 with your praises
Let's bless His holy Name
His faithfulness
 continues
To each generation the same.
 

 Chorus
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