Beaglesound

Please consider supporting CSN by supporting our advertisers!

Thread Rating:
  • 0 Vote(s) - 0 Average
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
"Jesus Walks With You" Lyrics
#1
Hello everyone,
   I have this song posted in the Song Critiques forum also but I know that some of us here on the site gravitate to this one over the other critique forum. I always appreciate peoples feedback as well as hoping to bless someone in the process. Tell me what you think, God bless!

Jesus Walks with You

Verse 1:
A hollow beat comes from your feet
As you walk alone
A small town street in summer's heat
A place you call home
Pre-chorus:
The rain made pools just like picture frames
The image viewed is all the same
From the late night sky
Under a full moon light

Chorus:
Some say when you walk past
The moonlit sky would cast
Two shadows along the ground
You were sure to let them know
You're really not alone
As Jesus walks with you through your hometown

Verse 2:
The Flag's half mast at the cenotaph
Every name you know
From working class to the diplomat
Only grace was shown
Your love displayed is beautiful
Like a beam of Heaven's Hope
From the late night sky
Under a full moon light

Chorus:
Some say when you walk past
The moonlit sky would cast
Two shadows along the ground
You were sure to let them know
You're really not alone
But Jesus walks with you through your hometown

Bridge:
Every neighbor you'd be sure to greet
Every hungry Soul you'd help to feed
Every burden that they shared
You lifted up in prayer
As Jesus walked with you through your hometown


Chorus:
Some say when you walk past
The moonlit sky would cast
Two shadows along the ground
You were sure to let them know
You're really not alone
But Jesus walks with you through your hometown
Ending:
A hollow beat comes from your feet
But you don't walk alone

https://soundcloud.com/jordanvac/jesus-w...ou-1st-cut
JordanClarke/Authorcopyright/August21,2016
"A healthy Spiritual walk with God leads you down a Natural Path of worship."
Reply
#2
Jordan,

I really like this song.  Great work...Great imagery and inner rhymes.

Neil
Reply
#3
(01-17-2017, 08:02 PM)novice62 Wrote: Jordan,

I really like this song.  Great work...Great imagery and inner rhymes.

Neil

Thanks Neil! I'm glad that you liked it. Always appreciate the feedback, God bless!

Jordan
"A healthy Spiritual walk with God leads you down a Natural Path of worship."
Reply


Forum Jump:


Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)
ACSA

Please consider supporting CSN by supporting our advertisers!