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We Bow Down
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I haven't been on this site for a couple of years. I posted this song on here a while back. This is the updated version.

Please critique it

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6_pan-XL...e=youtu.be


Dan
a.k.a Slob Bob
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(12-28-2017, 04:24 PM)JustMe Wrote: I haven't been on this site for a couple of years. I posted this song on here a while back. This is the updated version.

Please critique it

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6_pan-XL...e=youtu.be


Dan
a.k.a Slob Bob

Hi Bob,

Welcome back..

This song especially beginning verse ....progressing until last "We Bow Down" in first chorus) sounds like it would be all that is needed as lyrical material for a different sounding contemporary praise worship melody.

I admit I am a little confused about "who" the audience is for the song.....who is the present tense "We".?...the Church (Can't be the World!  The world does not bow down until later...) ...It is probably just me, but the song puzzled me in ending parts (bridge?) ..I am now wondering if this is praise song for Christians who in awe are saying "We bow down".....as in right now?  Or is it more of a future oriented song predicting that every knee will bow down.....which has lyrics that support that as well.

Keep or sweep...

Neil
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