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Holy War
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Dear friends,

I've posted another song for you to enjoy, having taken into account previous comments and suggestions. I hope you enjoy it.

Have a blessed week. 

Robyn


https://soundcloud.com/robyn-herselman/holy-war

Holy War

You speak and it is
You touch and we heal
You breathe and we are
But the world doesn't see Your heart

It's a holy war,  it's a holy war
But the battle's already won
the victory's Yours

You love and we live
You give and we're free
You save and we're forever Yours
What will it take for the world to believe

It's a holy war,  it's a holy war
But the battle's already won
the victory's Yours

You are worthy of every honour x 4

It's a holy war,  it's a holy war
But the battle's already won
the victory's Yours

You speak and it is
You touch and we heal
You breathe and we are
But the world doesn't see your heart
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(10-10-2017, 05:03 PM)robsie Wrote: Dear friends,

I've posted another song for you to enjoy, having taken into account previous comments and suggestions. I hope you enjoy it.

Have a blessed week. 

Robyn


https://soundcloud.com/robyn-herselman/holy-war

Holy War

You speak and it is
You touch and we heal
You breathe and we are
But the world doesn't see Your heart

It's a holy war,  it's a holy war
But the battle's already won
the victory's Yours

You love and we live
You give and we're free
You save and we're forever Yours
What will it take for the world to believe

It's a holy war,  it's a holy war
But the battle's already won
the victory's Yours

You are worthy of every honour x 4

It's a holy war,  it's a holy war
But the battle's already won
the victory's Yours

You speak and it is
You touch and we heal
You breathe and we are
But the world doesn't see your heart

Robyn,

Very very nice. 

Only minor change to lyrics I might suggest would be in the chorus ....

I recommend something fresher and newer in the place of "battle's already won, victory's yours"

Seems these words are used often in other songs already.

Also, perhaps start and end your chorus with "It's a holy war"......

Keep or sweep!

Neil
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