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Seasons of Grace
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This is a brand new song I just finished yesterday.  I have not been on at all recently due to working so much but hopefully will change.  Hopefully I will have a demo of it later this week.

 
I see your beauty in amazing things
From brilliant colors to the fragrances of spring
I see your hand is at work at all times
From new beginnings to new born life


Seasons change, you remain the same
Your graces endures, your love secures my life


I see your beauty in amazing ways
From stunning rainbows to a midsummers rain
I see your hand is at work at all times
From starting over to giving it another try


Seasons change, you remain the same
Your grace endures, your love secures my life


I see your beauty in amazing things
From mountain landscapes to falls changing leaves
I see your hand is at work at all times
Continuing to prosper or just getting by


Seasons change, you remain the same
Your grace endures, your love secures my life


I see your beauty in amazing things
From snowy mountains to iced over trees
I see your hand is at work at all times
From moving on to saying goodbye
I see your grace is at work at all times
From the beginning to the end of our lives


Seasons change, you remain the same
Your grace endures, your love secures
Your grace sustains, your love remains
Your love and grace changes my life.
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DaricOliver,  Great song topic!

One thing is you have a lot of repetition here which may be a good thing.  I look forward to hearing the melody and vocals to get a better feel for this one.  
Also I was not sure where the chorus, bridge verses start and end.  Can you mark these in next version please?  thanks, Neil
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