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Dance In Your Rain
#1
Hello everybody. I am posting this song to get your feedback. It has been re-written a little and I recently added a 2nd verse. Please please let me know your thoughts on this worship song. Thnx!

https://soundcloud.com/user645327906/dan...n-re-write

Dance In Your Rain
Written By Terrance McCoy (November 2004)
 
 
Verse:
1s          1         1s                1         4                                         
Fill this place. Flood this place. Move in this place with power and grace
1s          1         1s               1         4
Fill this place. Flood this place. Move in this place with power and grace
 
 
Chorus:
                 1                                                          
I want to dance in Your rain God .. I want to dance in Your rain, God
                4                                                    4/2                                      
I want to stand on Your feet, Lord and move to Your beat
                 1                      
I want to dance in Your rain, God … I want to dance in Your rain, God
                 4                                
I want to stand on Your feet, Lord and move to Your beat
                  D                                                    G
I want to dance in Your rain – I want to dance in Your rain
 
 
Verse 2:
 
Fill my soul – Flood my soul – Move in my soul – Take full control
 
Fill my soul – Flood my soul – Move in my soul – Take full control
 
 Bridge:
                  4
Pour Your love into the nations
        5   
Saturate with Your salvation
       6m                        4
And break these chains with Your rain





Terrance McCoy
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#2
(02-05-2016, 10:13 PM)tgmsings Wrote: Hello everybody. I am posting this song to get your feedback. It has been re-written a little and I recently added a 2nd verse. Please please let me know your thoughts on this worship song. Thnx!

https://soundcloud.com/user645327906/dan...n-re-write

Dance In Your Rain
Written By Terrance McCoy (November 2004)
 
 
Verse:
1s          1         1s                1         4                                         
Fill this place. Flood this place. Move in this place with power and grace
1s          1         1s               1         4
Fill this place. Flood this place. Move in this place with power and grace
 
 
Chorus:
                 1                                                          
I want to dance in Your rain God .. I want to dance in Your rain, God
                4                                                    4/2                                      
I want to stand on Your feet, Lord and move to Your beat
                 1                      
I want to dance in Your rain, God … I want to dance in Your rain, God
                 4                                
I want to stand on Your feet, Lord and move to Your beat
                  D                                                    G
I want to dance in Your rain – I want to dance in Your rain
 
 
Verse 2:
 
Fill my soul – Flood my soul – Move in my soul – Take full control
 
Fill my soul – Flood my soul – Move in my soul – Take full control
 
 Bridge:
                  4
Pour Your love into the nations
        5   
Saturate with Your salvation
       6m                        4
And break these chains with Your rain





Terrance McCoy

Wow Terrance, i have just visited your Soundcloud page, one guitar - one voice, i was in awe...i love your style so much, the words, the sound, the voice, you need to be on KLove!!!
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#3
(02-11-2016, 03:55 PM)Stella Wrote:
(02-05-2016, 10:13 PM)tgmsings Wrote: Hello everybody. I am posting this song to get your feedback. It has been re-written a little and I recently added a 2nd verse. Please please let me know your thoughts on this worship song. Thnx!

https://soundcloud.com/user645327906/dan...n-re-write

Dance In Your Rain
Written By Terrance McCoy (November 2004)
 
 
Verse:
1s          1         1s                1         4                                         
Fill this place. Flood this place. Move in this place with power and grace
1s          1         1s               1         4
Fill this place. Flood this place. Move in this place with power and grace
 
 
Chorus:
                 1                                                          
I want to dance in Your rain God .. I want to dance in Your rain, God
                4                                                    4/2                                      
I want to stand on Your feet, Lord and move to Your beat
                 1                      
I want to dance in Your rain, God … I want to dance in Your rain, God
                 4                                
I want to stand on Your feet, Lord and move to Your beat
                  D                                                    G
I want to dance in Your rain – I want to dance in Your rain
 
 
Verse 2:
 
Fill my soul – Flood my soul – Move in my soul – Take full control
 
Fill my soul – Flood my soul – Move in my soul – Take full control
 
 Bridge:
                  4
Pour Your love into the nations
        5   
Saturate with Your salvation
       6m                        4
And break these chains with Your rain





Terrance McCoy

Wow Terrance, i have just visited your Soundcloud page, one guitar - one voice, i was in awe...i love your style so much, the words, the sound, the voice, you need to be on KLove!!!
OMG.. thanks Stella. I appreciate the compliment. I'm a little embarrassed. haha
I have been on a rough journey for the last several years (self inflicted). God has been working in my life and growing me and preparing me for something great. I am new to all of this and I found this site. I have 3 songs on the professional level marketing list (?? whatever that means) haha But I really want to make friends on these sites.
I was glad to hear from you. I never hear from anyone and I'm not sure whyUndecided lol
You really encouraged me. thnx! If you ever want an honest song critique, I'd love to help you out.
Anything I can help with, just ask.

Terrance
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#4
I'll be your buddy and fan, from across the pond!
:-) So pleased for you, that you let God back into your life. He returns no voids!
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#5
Hello Terrance,
I like the song it's very good. This would make a good worship song. It has a warm melody that has a natural ability too stay with the listener. Great Job brother!
I'm new to this site as well so I also thought that I would say hello and welcome. It seems like a pretty active site and everyone does a great job at helping out when your stuck on a line or a song edit. God bless!
JordanC
"A healthy Spiritual walk with God leads you down a Natural Path of worship."
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#6
Sorry you feel that you don't hear from anyone Sad
I don't often comment on songs because I don't feel I have much to offer in that area. I'm usually looking out for lyricists who need help coming up with basic melody. And I'm still waiting on your take for "Lord of Glory"! Smile
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#7
Very lovely soaking song Terrance!
There is nothing not to like here.

Makes me want to dance in His rain!
I appreciate the final sentiments about the nations. 
Very nice.

Called to, "Teach the word of the Lord; sing it to the nations loud and clear."
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#8
Terrance, is there any chance of you submitting "Burn" as well?
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#9
(02-25-2016, 11:02 AM)JordanC Wrote: Hello Terrance,
  I like the song it's very good. This would make a good worship song. It has a warm melody that has a natural ability too stay with the listener. Great Job brother!
  I'm new to this site as well so I also thought that I would say hello and welcome. It seems like a pretty active site and everyone does a great job at helping out when your stuck on a line or a song edit. God bless!
JordanC

Jordan,

Thanks for the input. That was very encouraging. I look very forward to hearing some of your works.

Terrance
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#10
(02-25-2016, 02:32 PM)ShannonB Wrote: Sorry you feel that you don't hear from anyone Sad
I don't often comment on songs because I don't feel I have much to offer in that area. I'm usually looking out for lyricists who need help coming up with basic melody. And I'm still waiting on your take for "Lord of Glory"! Smile

Sorry, I had not been on here much lately. I will try to listen to "Lord of Glory" tonight. As a listener you always have a voice about a song. I would always like to hear any comments you have concerning any songs.
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