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Movin' Mountains
#1
Here is one for any critiques please...Thanks. Neil


Movin' Mountains


https://www.soundclick.com/html5/v3/play...19445&q=hi

Verse 1:

 
Jesus met a desp’rate father
Who was shaken and undone
He was anguished, deeply troubled
And concerned about his son
“Your disciples failed to heal him”
Said the father to the Lord
IF You can, Lord, I’m appealin’,
Let my son now be restored
 
Chorus 

Sometimes problems are like mountains
Looming large and tow'ring tall
Movin' mountains comes from countin'
On the God who's Lord of All

Though our faith is not abounding
And perhaps it seems too small
Movin' mountains without doubtin'
Scarcely takes much faith at all
 

Verse 2:
 
Jesus answered caring, thoughtful
Saying IF you will believe
There is nothing that's impossible,
What you ask in faith can be
“I believe”, Lord, You can heal him
But please help my unbelief’
So the Master said to bring him
Healed his son and set him free
 
Chorus

Instrumental
 
Verse 3:

Do you have some lofty summit
That is standing in your way?
You can’t seem to o’ercome it
Maybe facing every day
When its faith that you are lacking
And your mountains don't obey
There is faith that’s for the asking
And His Word will give you Faith
 
Chorus

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Movin' mountains without doubtin'
Scarcely takes much faith at all
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#2
Hi Neil
sweet country song
traditional, I am sure you realize, the melody very much like many
Great singer and piano player!

It seems like the lines
Movin' mountains comes from countin'
SPACE
On the God who's Lord of All

doesn't need that pause, it seems awkward to me

I like the key change

The chorus is very much like the verse, can you brighten it up so it stands out?
If I was not reading along, I would not know it was the chorus.

Little more tweaking needed

Blessings
angSmile
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#3
not sure how to pm you. Would it be wrong to record what I hear and send it to you? My skill aint the best but I can maybe use my mandolin and sing. Hope it i'm not being inappropriate.
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(10-16-2017, 08:56 PM)BKCooper Wrote: not sure how to pm you. Would it be wrong to record what I hear and send it to you? My skill aint the best but I can maybe use my mandolin and sing. Hope it i'm not being inappropriate.

BK Feel free!  I'd love to hear it.

Thanks,

Neil
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#5
(08-25-2017, 11:45 AM)angela Wrote: Hi Neil
sweet country song
traditional, I am sure you realize, the melody very much like many
Great singer and piano player!

It seems like the lines
Movin' mountains comes from countin'
SPACE
On the God who's Lord of All

doesn't need that pause, it seems awkward to me

I like the key change

The chorus is very much like the verse, can you brighten it up so it stands out?
If I was not reading along, I would not know it was the chorus.

Little more tweaking needed

Blessings
angSmile

Ang,

Thanks for recommendations....I will try to re-work this one.

Neil
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