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Sweep Me Clean 333333
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all comments welcome
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Sweep Me Clean                        
 
 
Verse 1
Has there been a grimy place I’ve wandered?
Been caught in cobwebs I could not claw out of?
Out of muck and mire God has rescued me
May He sweep me clean and find no more debris
 
CHORUS
Sweep me clean Holy Spirit sweep me clean
How I need your cleansing breeze
Sweep my heart sweep my home come and purify my soul
Sweep me clean Holy Spirit sweep me clean
 
Verse 2
I’m so glad He purged my filthy mess
And by His strength I’ll try to do my best
May He find me blameless ready washed and swept
Spirit help me walk the way of righteousness
 
 
CHORUS  x2
 
TAG
Sweep my heart sweep my home come and purify my soul
Sweep me clean Holy Spirit sweep me clean
 
 
 
©2017 angela dittmar
Angel Flower Music LLC
angelflowermusic.com
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#2
Hey ang - I like this! love the chorus - especially the line "How I need your cleansing breeze"! I like the chords you have there, I like the imagery you created with the words - very nice!

mix-wise I think you've got too much 'high end" on this - it's a little harsh to my ears because of the high end. also, I think the verb on the vocals is way too much, I'd back that down a lot.

great job! love this song!
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#3
Thanks

I will remix and fix Smile
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#4
remixed
any better?
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