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Just Inspired
#1
Latest Inspiration For a New Gospel Song;
Big Grin Big Grin Big Grin

NO ONE LIKE JEHOVAH
CHORUS; 
At the sound of your name
Daemons tremble and flee
We declare you our king
No one like Jehovah
forever you're the same
my God and lord you'll be
you're praises i will sing 
No none like Jehovah 

VS 1;
We will worship and we'll praise
not by us but by your grace
glory honour to your name
Hallelujah lord you reign
none like you in all the earth 
in the heavens and beyond 
we will reverence you in awe
 no one like Jehovah

[ B.T.C ]

no one like jehovah [8x]
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#2
Reminds me of

behold He comes
riding on the clouds

there's no one like Jehovah 8x

do you know that song?
hope this SOUNDS very different

Blessings
ang Smile
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#3
(08-13-2017, 06:17 PM)angela Wrote: Reminds me of

behold He comes
riding on the clouds

there's no one like Jehovah 8x

do you know that song?
hope this SOUNDS very different

Blessings
ang Smile

na...... not at all Big Grin
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#4
verse rhyme pattern and chorus differ. this throws me for a bit of a loop. I have heard it is best to have the chorus and verse be same length and have the same rhyme pattern... helps people remember the song easier.
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#5
tee,

We all have room to improve. 

Should Daemons be demons? I'm not typo-free myself, but if spelling is not something to be concerned about, why not "At the sownd of your name Diamonds Trembill and Phlee?"

"Hallelujah lord you reign". For those like me that do English vs. Hebrew (what's it like in your neighborhood?), what are you saying? Is the one that reigns named Hallelujah Lord? If what you are saying is meant to give praise, why not say "I praise you, Lord. You reign."  

Keep writing! Smile
From death he did rise and will come again.
Move on with him now to be ready for then.
the gruvster
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