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"You Could Live Again" - level 3 critiques welcome
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Hey Hamster
Yes I remember this vaguely

It flows nicely
a little nit:
I do think you could make the pre chorus more powerful
but I have no suggestions............ just the know/so is so, ahh, you know?

also, your talking about a person losing someone, but the Lord says so "you" can live again
wouldn't it be more comforting for the Lord to say so "All" can live again?
Now that would really mess up your lyric...........
hmmm
how about a tag
"so all can live again"

as always, keep or sweep.

Let me know when the music is up

Blessings
ang Smile
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RE: "You Can Live Again" - level 3 critiques welcome - by angela - 03-20-2017, 02:55 PM

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