03-20-2017, 11:52 AM
(03-20-2017, 08:23 AM)damp hamster Wrote: I like the revised verse lyrics - I think you did a definite upgrade there. After listening twice, I think you may need to fiddle with the timing of some of the words in the verse and maybe a word or two in the chorus as well.
Yo are absolutely right on the timing. I am hoping to get a real singer and piano player for this one. Thanks for the comments.