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Stand Befrore Your Throne - BobisBack - 08-28-2017

I guess since I've already paid to record the demo, there is not a whole lot
of change I am going to make, but am open to suggestions if someone eventually
wants to record it.

Stand Before Your Throne

I am weak, in the presence of Your beauty
I grow faint from the touch of Your hand
I collapse at one glimpse of Your Glory
With You this near, I just cannot stand

Lord who can stand before You?
Who can climb that hill?
Purify my heart
Purge me of my will  (This is the one line I've changed half a dozen times and not completely sold on)

So I can stand before Your throne
And join the angels in "Holy, Holy!"
Worship You alone
Holy! Holy! Holy! Holy!
I'll stand before Your throne
And join the angels in "Holy, Holy!"
Who Was and Is to Come
Holy! Holy! Holy Holy Lord

Who Was and Is and Is to Come
Holy Holy Holy Holy  (x4)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6Q86pnPUNy4

http://www.bobmadermusic.com/


RE: Stand Befrore Your Throne - novice62 - 08-29-2017

(08-28-2017, 09:17 AM)BobisBack Wrote: I guess since I've already paid to record the demo, there is not a whole lot
of change I am going to make, but am open to suggestions if someone eventually
wants to record it.

Stand Before Your Throne

I am weak, in the presence of Your beauty
I grow faint from the touch of Your hand
I collapse at one glimpse of Your Glory
With You this near, I just cannot stand                                                                Bob here's my 2 cents worth...keep or sweep!  ..Neil  (not Diamond but you sound like him)

Lord who can stand before You?
Who can climb that hill?  (And not burn within?)..........................from Gospel...did our hearts not burn within us.......and God is as a consuming fire which ties to next line Purify
Purify my heart
Purge me of my will  (Purge me from my sins)
So I can stand before Your throne
And join the angels in "Holy, Holy!"
Worship You alone
Holy! Holy! Holy! Holy!
I'll stand before Your throne
And join the angels in "Holy, Holy!"
Who Was and Is to Come
Holy! Holy! Holy Holy Lord

Who Was and Is and Is to Come
Holy Holy Holy Holy  (x4)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6Q86pnPUNy4

http://www.bobmadermusic.com/



RE: Stand Befrore Your Throne - firesong - 09-01-2017

Bob...this is a great worship/confessional song...a great congregational song for contemporary worship...love the recording...top notch...I was singing before it ended which is always a good sign (not that I'm singing but that it causes,compels you to join in)...great write IMO....just a thought , Dan


RE: Stand Befrore Your Throne - Dell Neal - 09-01-2017

I like everything about this song!!!


RE: Stand Befrore Your Throne - swesternmusic - 09-07-2017

Bob,
Excellent, very praise worthy.
I liked the original "Who can climb that mountain" because it is there where you oftentimes meet God in the Bible but then I read what Neil suggested and I think that has the edge in my mind.
Thank you for sharing,
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