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  Walk With You
Posted by: ShannonB - 02-03-2016, 12:08 PM - Forum: Song Critiques - Replies (5)

https://soundcloud.com/user-759209468/walk-with-you

Repost. Hope the veterans don't mind me sharing with the Newbies!
Walk With You

I have walked with you all your life.
I have walked with you through joy & strife.
And I will walk with you in your darkest night.
I will be here for you, I will be your light.
I’m gonna walk with you. Walk with you.

I’m gonna walk with you by the waters still.
Will you walk with me up Calvary’s Hill?
I wanna show you what’s been done for you.
Will you walk with me, it’s a beautiful view.
I laid my life down, and I picked it up again.
I have done everything to take away your sin.
I’m gonna walk with you. Walk with you.

I’m gonna walk with you to the Promise Land.
I’m gonna walk with you so don’t let go of my hand.
I’m gonna walk with you, that’s all you need to know.
I’m gonna walk with you, so don’t you dare let go.
I’m gonna walk with you. Walk with you.

I’m gonna walk with you to the Promise Land.
I’m gonna walk with you, so don’t let go of my hand.
And when you cannot walk anymore,
I’m gonna carry you to my Father’s Shore.
I’m gonna carry you, carry you.

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  Only Grace Can Save Me Now
Posted by: ShannonB - 02-03-2016, 12:01 PM - Forum: Song Critiques - Replies (4)

https://soundcloud.com/user-759209468/on...e-now-demo

Only Grace Can Save Me Now

I’m walking down an alley so long and dark
I’m searching for an answer all I see is my heart.
But I feel Your hand, & it’s reaching out
And I realize only grace can save me now.

I’m standing at the bottom of a cold dark hole.
I’m searching for an answer all I see is my soul.
But I feel Your hand, & it’s reaching out
And I realize only grace can save me now.

I’m bound and I’m surrounded by a cold dark cage
I’m searching for an answer all I see is my rage.
But I feel Your hand, & You hold the key
And I realize only grace can set me free.

Yeah, I felt Your hand, and it was reaching out
And I realize that Your grace has saved me now.
Yeah, I felt Your hand, and it was reaching down
And I realize that Your grace has saved me now.
Yeah, I felt Your hand, and You held the key
And I realize that Your grace has set me free.

Thank You, Jesus, You saved my heart.
Thank You, Jesus, You saved my soul.
Thank You, Jesus, You set me free & I realize
That Your grace is all I need.

I don't have the chords for this, but my friend who recorded it might, if anyone is interested.

Thanks for asking, Steve!

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  THIS SIDE OF FOREVER 333
Posted by: 4HisGlory - 02-02-2016, 12:59 AM - Forum: Lyric Critiques - Replies (5)

This is a song I started back in October of 15 and have been in rewrite/edit for the last couple of months.This is the closest I've been to the finish line (I hope)[Image: huh.png].



THIS SIDE OF FOREVER  
c 2015

People living on our streets
Children with no food to eat
Soul's crying for relief
This side of forever

With so many people dying
Cause they just give up trying
Wanting more than just surviving
This side of forever

Chorus

With so much sadness in this life
We need the love that God provides
It's the rule by which He measures
This side of forever

Verse

This world can never be our friend
And our soul needs to be cleansed
With an offering for our sin
This side of forever

So we're provided an escape
And Jesus Christ light's the way
With His amazing grace
This side of forever

Repeat Chorus

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  You Never Change - Terrance McCoy
Posted by: tgmsings - 02-01-2016, 09:47 PM - Forum: Song Critiques - Replies (10)

https://soundcloud.com/user645327906/you-never-change

You Never Change is a song I wrote a few years back and continue tweaking on. I really wanted to get this in front of you all. I want to know your thoughts on the overall song. I have really enjoyed being a part of this and look forward to continue in these new found friendships.

FYI.. I have just recently changed the pre-chorus (I removed the repeated "You Are")



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  Hi!!!
Posted by: fishing14 - 02-01-2016, 05:18 PM - Forum: Hello My Name is... - Replies (4)

Hi!!!

I'm back... just saying.

Andru

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  Cry Of The Young
Posted by: Steve A - 01-31-2016, 11:15 PM - Forum: Song Critiques - Replies (3)

This song was written for a play under the same name.......The play is an Outreach to the youth of today....


Cry Of The Young


Cry Of The Young

On a cold hard city night
There's kids at play, playing with guns & knives
Someones child dies
Battle lines are being drawn
City Streets blast out the sounds of war
Someone pays the cost

When you look around you can see the Cry Of The Young
Lives are over before they ever get to start
If you listen really hard you hear the Cry Of The Young

Things aren't how they used to be
In a land of locked doors & broken dreams
Someones mother cries
Heading down a one way road
In search of something that they can't find at home
Someones babies lost

When you look around you can see the Cry Of The Young
Lives are over before they ever get to start
If you listen really hard you hear the Cry Of The Young

When you look around you can see the Cry Of The Young
Lives are over before they ever get to start
If you listen really hard you hear the Cry Of The Young

The Cry Of The Young.....The Cry Of The Young
The Cry Of The Young.....The Cry Of The Young

The Cry Of The Young.....The Cry Of The Young
The Cry Of The Young.....The Cry Of The Young
The Cry Of The Young.....


[url=https://soundcloud.com/stevealtonian/cry-of-the-young][/url]

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  "(Psalm) 102" - songwriter submission
Posted by: damp hamster - 01-31-2016, 04:52 PM - Forum: Whetstone Project - Replies (2)

Is there a worship band that wants to record some blues?

http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=11554899


(Psalm) 102

Intro        C          Am          Dm         C       C4      C

                      C                           Am            
When all my days - dissolve like smoke
      Dm                                            C
My heart is blighted, withered like grass
              C                           Am 
I am reduced - to skin and bone
         Dm                                 G 
I eat ashes - and I wither like grass

Chorus  

             Am           F  
Still my soul - will sing
        C                          C4   C        G 
For You, o Lord, reign over us forever
        Am             F
Yes, You - will arise
              C                    C4            C            G 
And the nations of the Earth will see Your glory
       F
(o Lord, o Lord, o Lord    -    o Lord, o Lord, o Lord)

              
In the course - of my life
You broke my strength, You cut short my days
I cry for help - to You, o Lord
Don't turn from me when I'm in distress


©R. Gingrich/Serious Noise Publishing

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  "My Devotion" - songwriter submission
Posted by: damp hamster - 01-31-2016, 11:56 AM - Forum: Whetstone Project - Replies (6)

Is there a worship band out there interested in recording this song for the Whetstone project?

http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=11557881


My Devotion

Intro:     A      A2         D           E   (repeat)

                  F#m      E        A    

I pledge to You my full devotion

                 F#m      E/G#          A 
Let not my will but Your's be done
              F#m     E          A  
I'm like a ship upon the ocean
                     D          E      A
You are my captain, Holy One

Chorus  
                  D               E           A
I want to know Your heart, o God
                D            E           A
I want to be more like the Christ
                         D             E
And more than anything else
               A (walk up)  D 
I want to offer   my - self
            Bm     E      A       (to intro)
I'll be a living sacrifice


Lord, I will follow You forever
And where You lead me, I will go
Through stormy seas and wildest weather
Your hand will guide me safely home

©R. Gingrich/Serious Noise Publishing

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  Rap video praying in the light
Posted by: reacts - 01-30-2016, 09:16 PM - Forum: Song Critiques - Replies (1)






This was made by me my son Malachi and my cousion beast one aka Gabriel

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  Worship Jesus - Whetstone Project
Posted by: tpistilli - 01-30-2016, 08:47 PM - Forum: Whetstone Project - Replies (2)

Here's the new and improved (I hope) mix.

https://soundcloud.com/ctonyp/worship-jesus-mix-2

WORSHIP JESUS   (Em) (fast song)
 
Chorus:
          Em            C  D            Em           Am               Em             Am
LET'S WORSHIP JESUS - HE SHED HIS BLOOD AND TOOK OUR SHAME
 
          Em            C  D      Em                Am           Em                  Am
LET'S WORSHIP JESUS - SINGING HIS PRAISES ‘CAUSE WE’RE  SAVED
 
          Em            C  D            Em              Am            Em           Am
LET'S WORSHIP JESUS - HE GAVE EVERYTHING TO SAVE OUR SOUL
 
          Em            C  D      Em         Am         Em          Am
LET'S WORSHIP JESUS - RISING AGAIN HE GAVE US HOPE
 
 
Verse 1:
D                                                                      C                                 D
WE SING THIS SONG OF JOY ‘CAUSE HIS BLOOD HAS SET US FREE
           D                                     C                               Am                Bm
AND  WE WILL SING GOD’S PRAISES THROUGHOUT ETERNITY
 
 
Verse 2:
D                                                                      C                        D
HE FREED US FROM SIN’S PRISON AND GAVE US LIBERTY
      D                                C                  Am                       Bm
SO LETS ALL SING TO JESUS, THIS SONG OF VICTORY

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