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  Seasons of Grace
Posted by: DaricOliver - 08-27-2017, 11:11 PM - Forum: Song Critiques - Replies (1)

This is a brand new song I just finished yesterday.  I have not been on at all recently due to working so much but hopefully will change.  Hopefully I will have a demo of it later this week.

 
I see your beauty in amazing things
From brilliant colors to the fragrances of spring
I see your hand is at work at all times
From new beginnings to new born life


Seasons change, you remain the same
Your graces endures, your love secures my life


I see your beauty in amazing ways
From stunning rainbows to a midsummers rain
I see your hand is at work at all times
From starting over to giving it another try


Seasons change, you remain the same
Your grace endures, your love secures my life


I see your beauty in amazing things
From mountain landscapes to falls changing leaves
I see your hand is at work at all times
Continuing to prosper or just getting by


Seasons change, you remain the same
Your grace endures, your love secures my life


I see your beauty in amazing things
From snowy mountains to iced over trees
I see your hand is at work at all times
From moving on to saying goodbye
I see your grace is at work at all times
From the beginning to the end of our lives


Seasons change, you remain the same
Your grace endures, your love secures
Your grace sustains, your love remains
Your love and grace changes my life.

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  Hi
Posted by: Vincent - 08-27-2017, 10:37 PM - Forum: Hello My Name is... - Replies (1)

no big intro..I`m Vincent, and I wanted to join a Christian writing forum.

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  Follow Him
Posted by: novice62 - 08-27-2017, 03:49 PM - Forum: Lyric Critiques - Replies (2)

Please see latest version far below.....Any comments to improve on this one are still appreciated  Thank you.  Neil



Verse 1
 
If you will follow Jesus Christ
You will never walk in darkness
You will walk in the light
He is the Light and the Light of Life

 
Chorus:
 
Let go of your life, leave it behind
Let it go for Jesus’ sake
Release it to the Lord and you will find
True life from believing in Jesus’ Name

Let go of your life, leave it behind
Lose your life for Jesus’ sake
Give in to God as He designed
Let go, let God, have His way

Verse 2

 
If you want to follow Him
Choosing to be His disciple 
You must turn from your ways
Pick up your cross ev’ry single day
 

Chorus

Instrumental Bridge
 
Verse 3
(Key change)

 
If you will serve Him, follow Him
Where He is His servant will be
There will be blessings in return
God will honor anyone who serves

 
Chorus

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  All is Well
Posted by: Dodiee - 08-26-2017, 04:44 PM - Forum: Lyric Critiques - Replies (7)

© Deb Rempel 2017
 
Verse One
Going through a tough spell, Lord, You know.
My fault that I fell, oh, Lord, You know.
I prayed for relief.
All You gave was peace –
(So I’m) Singing from this darkness, “All is well.”
 
Chorus
All is well with my soul.
Even here, in this hole.
Lord, I have no doubt
You will raise me out.
‘Till You do I’m singing, “All is well.”
 
Verse Two
Days stretch into weeks, oh, Lord, You know.
When will this trouble cease -only You know --
(But) All my days are Yours
So, I trust You, Lord.
Until I am released, Lord, All is well.
 
Chorus
 
Bridge
I have lived
In my own hell.
You raised me then.
Yes, all is well.
Under Your wings, Lord,
I surely dwell.
Oh, take Your time, Lord.
All is well.
 
Chorus
 
 
 
 
 

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  In His Hands
Posted by: angela - 08-25-2017, 11:55 AM - Forum: Song Critiques - Replies (7)

All feedback welcome
Thank you
Blessings
ang Smile

based on Numbers 6:24-26

https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13554159

In His Hands

Verse 1
May the Good LORD bless and keep you
May He make His face shine upon you
May the Lord be gracious and give you peace
And give you peace, and give you peace, and give you peace

CHORUS
You’re in His hands
You’re in His hands
Don’t have to worry
Cause He has a plan
He really loves
He really cares
You don’t have to worry
Cause you’re in His hands

Verse 2
May the Good LORD bless and keep us
May He make His face shine upon us
May the Lord be gracious and give us peace
And give us peace, and give us peace, and give us peace

CHORUS 2
We’re in His hands
We’re in His hands
Don’t have to worry
Cause He has a plan
He really loves
He really cares
We don’t have to worry
Cause we’re in His hands

Bridge
How good it is to be in His hands
How good it is to be in His hands

CHORUS
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©2017 angela dittmar
Angel Flower Music LLC
angelflowermusic.com

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  Movin' Mountains
Posted by: novice62 - 08-24-2017, 03:33 PM - Forum: Song Critiques - Replies (4)

Here is one for any critiques please...Thanks. Neil


Movin' Mountains


https://www.soundclick.com/html5/v3/play...19445&q=hi

Verse 1:

 
Jesus met a desp’rate father
Who was shaken and undone
He was anguished, deeply troubled
And concerned about his son
“Your disciples failed to heal him”
Said the father to the Lord
IF You can, Lord, I’m appealin’,
Let my son now be restored
 
Chorus 

Sometimes problems are like mountains
Looming large and tow'ring tall
Movin' mountains comes from countin'
On the God who's Lord of All

Though our faith is not abounding
And perhaps it seems too small
Movin' mountains without doubtin'
Scarcely takes much faith at all
 

Verse 2:
 
Jesus answered caring, thoughtful
Saying IF you will believe
There is nothing that's impossible,
What you ask in faith can be
“I believe”, Lord, You can heal him
But please help my unbelief’
So the Master said to bring him
Healed his son and set him free
 
Chorus

Instrumental
 
Verse 3:

Do you have some lofty summit
That is standing in your way?
You can’t seem to o’ercome it
Maybe facing every day
When its faith that you are lacking
And your mountains don't obey
There is faith that’s for the asking
And His Word will give you Faith
 
Chorus

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Movin' mountains without doubtin'
Scarcely takes much faith at all

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  Choice to Rejoice
Posted by: tpistilli - 08-23-2017, 06:34 PM - Forum: Song Critiques - Replies (2)

Here's a complete remix of a song I wrote a couple years ago. This is intended as an upbeat congregational song....Let me know what you think....

https://soundcloud.com/ctonyp/choice-to-rejoice-remixed

Chorus:
   I WILL MAKE A CHOICE
   I WILL MAKE A CHOICE
   I WILL MAKE A CHOICE 
   TO REJOICE, TO REJOICE    (x2)
 
 Verse 1:
 WHEN THE ENEMY TRIES TO GET TO ME
 BY REMINDING ME OF MY PAST               
 OR THE TRIALS OF LIFE START TO DIM THE LIGHT
 I WILL MAKE UP MY MIND TO STAND UP AND  FIGHT
  
Verse 2:
WHEN THE FIRE HEATS UP I WILL NEVER GIVE UP
JESUS CHRIST HAS NEVER LET ME DOWN                         
WITH REFINING FLAME, ONLY GOLD REMAINS
AND THE JOY OF THE LORD IS MY STRENGTH

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  Camille Nelson - Lead Me Home
Posted by: camillenelson - 08-22-2017, 11:18 PM - Forum: Song Critiques - Replies (2)

Hello everyone! I would like to share my new album with you that I just released. It is a primarily instrumental album consisting of Acoustic Guitar & String Instruments. The album features my take on popular hymns as well as a few originals! 





The video above is the first music video that was made from a song featured on the album. "Be Thou My Vision" is a traditional hymn originating from Ireland and was shot in Howth, Ireland!

I've worked with many amazing people on this project and can't thank them enough. Thank you for listening and if you're interested you can buy the album here:

Amazon: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B072R1SL8F/ref...CzbJPR8D9S
Deseret Book: https://deseretbook.com/p/lead-me-home?r...=153050-cd
iTunes: https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/lead-m...1247950357
(The album is also available for streaming on Spotify)

If you're interested in any future updates you can follow my social media here:
http://www.camillenelson.com/
https://www.facebook.com/camillenelsonmusic/
https://www.instagram.com/camillenelsonmusic/
https://twitter.com/camillenmusic

Thank you again for supporting me in whichever way you choose!

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  Love vs. hate
Posted by: softproinc - 08-22-2017, 07:53 PM - Forum: Lyric Critiques - Replies (4)

All comments appreciated.   God Bless John.


Love vs. hate

(verse 1)
So many bombs fly and so many people die        
Children starve while their mothers can only cry                                
Terror finds its way into everyday life                  
Its message of destruction and death cuts like a knife      

(pre chorus)
But we don’t have to accept our world’s hate                      
Because God’s Love       


(chorus)
Led David to conquer Goliath, Moses to part the sea
Led Jesus to rise above dying saving you and me   
So understand when they come face to face                
God’s Love obliterates hate   
God’s Love obliterates hate            

(verse 2)
Politics divides us tweets spread anger all around   
We hide behind our parties trust can’t be found
Judgement based on color won’t go away           
The resulting dissension can’t be held at bay      

(pre chorus)
But we don’t have to accept our world’s hate                      
Because God’s Love       


(chorus)
Led David to conquer Goliath, Moses to part the sea
Led Jesus to rise above dying saving you and me                     
So understand when they come face to face                 
God’s Love obliterates hate  
God’s Love obliterates hate       

(bridge)
We can stamp out all the wickedness
We just need to have the willingness                     
To raise one hand to The Almighty above            
And reach out the other to one needing His Love  

Instrumental:  

(pre chorus)
(chorus)

(pre chorus)
(chorus)

“Love vs hate” ©2017 John McKivergan (ASCAP)


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  Hope in God
Posted by: novice62 - 08-22-2017, 06:13 PM - Forum: Song Critiques - No Replies

Here's one re-done, please let me know andy and all comments on improving it.  Thank you.  Neil


Hope in God

Copyright  2015
Composer: Andru Wang
Words: Neil Sleevi


https://www.soundclick.com/html5/v3/play...18764&q=hi


Verse 1


O my soul
What has got you so downcast?

Let it go
Any hurting from the past
Hope in God!
Let His grace flow into you


Verse 2


O my soul
Trouble knows you far too well,
Taken hold.
You're discouraged I can tell
Hope in God!
He alone is all that’s true

 
Pre-Chorus

Life can be completely new

At the cross, Christ died for you

Chorus 

Soul, put your hope in God
Our refuge and our strength
He’s light and power

In darkest hour
Soul put your hope in God
Soul, put your hope in God

Our refuge and our strength
He’s light and power
In darkest hour
Soul put your hope in God
Soul put your hope in God

Verse 3


O my soul
Is your future filled with dread
Are you low?
Let His peace take hold instead
Hope in God!
He’s returning, coming soon

Pre-Chorus


Chorus

Bridge

Because of the Lord

We are not destroyed
His love will never fail.

Remember His Word
Be overjoyed
Soul, put your hope in God

 
Chorus
 

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