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look to the east
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Love vs. hate
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  new balance donna
Posted by: OmarJaylo - 1 hour ago - Forum: Lyric Critiques - No Replies

New Balance ci dà molto piacere in questa bellissima new balance donna silhouette, e appena in tempo per i caldi mesi estivi. Questo ideale usura estesa 998 viene imballato un intersuola abforbola che è sicuro di mantenere la comodità ad un livello sempre alto. Insieme ad un design ultra comodo vediamo una bella colorata, partendo dal suolo con una suola nera, verso l'intersuola bianca e nera, e infine una bellissima top suede scamosciata in grigio con accenti di azzurro sulla scatola della punta e sul tallone . Questi calci sono chiamati in modo appropriato il Moby Dick, ma la vera domanda è che tu caverai un paio di questi M998MDs? 

Una delle poche scarpe da basket di New Balance fa un ritorno in pochi giorni. La sneaker firma di James Worthy il nuovo bilanciamento P740 Worthy Express ci darà grazia con la sua presenza dopo una lunga pausa di 4 anni. Mentre alcuni penserebbero che una scarpa con un grande Laker indosserebbe la famosa new balance 574 porpora e l'oro, questa scarpa con cerniera retrò mantiene le cose semplici con un combo a colori in bianco e nero. Nel caso tu abbia dimenticato, Packer Shoes li avrà in vendita il 10 luglio per $ 120. Ti senti queste cose? Colpisci quella sezione di commenti e parli il tuo pezzo. 

Questo nuovo new balance 574 prezzo bilanciamento 530 OG è pronto per l'estate! Come si può vedere dalle foto sopra, questo nuovo bilanciamento 530 OG presenta una base luminosa in mesh bianco con tocchi di pelle bianca sulla punta e sul pannello centrale. Fornire tutto il carattere per questo 530 OG sono i colpi di azzurro reale e giallo che riposano su sezioni come la lingua, la fodera e il contatore del tallone. Anche in arrivo sul mix sono colpi di droga di nero sul nuovo bilanciamento N e sulla suola. Questo bianco / royal-giallo New Balance 530 OG è ora disponibile via Sneaker Politics. Che cosa pensi di questo nuovo bilancio new balance 574 offerta 530 OG? 

New Balance dà alla popolazione femminile un'altra colorante esclusiva e ancora una volta sto sedendo qui scuotendo la testa perchè noi ragazzi non otteniamo le stesse colorways. Voglio dire che entrambe queste sagome sono estremamente classiche e dipingono l'immagine di esattamente quello che New Balance si è impegnato negli ultimi anni e queste coloranti realmente completano perfettamente le silhouette. A partire dal 574 vediamo un intessuto superiore verde intenso, bianco / nero e un bel po 'di stampa supplementare sulla zona del tallone. Il 580 ottiene il sicuro tocco femminile con una suola nera, intersuola bianca e una parte superiore di blu navy con tutti gli accenti da abbinare. Signore ti farai una coppia o no? 

Queste scarpe da ginnastica classiche provengono da un tempo in cui forse alcuni di voi non possono nemmeno ricordare o addirittura cominciare a ricordare. New Balance ci dà un classico colorante per abbinare questa silhouette insieme ad alcuni lavori di premio sulla scatola del piede che sembra un materiale a maglia. Insieme a tutto questo piccolo discorso vediamo un colorante bianco ed azzurro mescolato con alcuni neri che trasformano questa scarpa da running classica in qualcosa che potevo anche vedere a me oscillare, di tanto in tanto forse. Vuoi raccogliere un paio di questi sneaks da New Balance o no? 

Il New Balance 574 new balance 574 uomo offerta Unisex viene trattato in un nero piacevole e pulito sulla colorazione nera di quest'estate. Le foto dettagliate sopra mostrano un bel braccio nero New Balance 574 che presenta una miscela di nubuck nero e pelle nera con texture. Il cuoio strutturato poggia sul pattino, sui pannelli e sul tallone, mentre il nubuck nero occupa il contatore, il colletto e il tallone del tallone. Questo nero sul nero New Balance 574 Unisex è ora disponibile tramite negozi come Hype DC. pensate al New Balance 574 Unisex e questo nero sul colorway nero? Li raccoglierai? Facci sapere nella sezione commenti qui sotto.

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  Twenty-one
Posted by: pshell - 7 hours ago - Forum: Song Critiques - No Replies

Here's my song for October. See if you understand what it's about.

Twenty-one
Music & lyrics by Paul Shell

Cartoon prophets with bloody hands,
Hold the truth well out of reach,
While the camera stares unblinking,
At the hatred that they teach.
When murder is your gospel,
And your sacrament's a gun,
You can say that you're misunderstood.
All I see is twenty-one.

The kings and queens who rule the Earth,
Keep their aces up their sleeves.
They can't understand believers,
Because there's nothing they believe.
Politicians smile and wave,
As the bones bleach in the sun.
You can count the martyrs on each side.
All I see is Twenty-one.

You talk of peace but I hear,
There are rumors of a war.
Will you sell your cloak like Jesus said,
When the demons are at your door?
When saints are forced onto their knees,
And the killing has begun,
You can say that you're misunderstood.
All I see is twenty-one.

Walk on water stained with blood,
As the bride cries out to know,
Should we trade the cross of the peaceful Christ,
For the crosses of Clairvaux?
The angel rider draws his sword,
And the red horse makes its run.
You can count the martyrs on each side.
All I see is twenty-one.
All I see is twenty-one.
All I see is twenty-one.

https://soundcloud.com/paul-shell/10-21a

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  I believe (unfinished song)
Posted by: savedbygrace99 - Yesterday, 03:23 PM - Forum: Lyric Critiques - Replies (1)

Hi!
So I only have a verse and maybe either the chorus or a second verse for this song.. I don't know what to put next. Suggestions are welcome. 


I believe your promises are true/ 
I believe when things are broken/ 
you can make them new/ 
I believe that You are only good/
You are the one I run to/ 
When things in this life are not understood/ 

So even in the breaking, even in my tears/ 
I will trust you Jesus, I know you'll meet me here/ 
Even in the waiting, no matter where I am/ 
I know that you, hold me in Your hands/ 
Even in the shadows, when I can't see the road/ 
I will remember, that I will never walk alone/

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  Returning after a long absence
Posted by: RevBillDaviet - Yesterday, 12:40 AM - Forum: Hello My Name is... - Replies (1)

i joined and participated in the 2002-2003 time frame but now I’m starting with a new logon and password. I write a small amount of secular blues/country/funk but mostly contemporary Christian pop, praise and worship. I’m dated a bit in the late 80’s early 90’s period in my approach and my style, I like songs with a purpose such as story songs, songs that teach precepts or build faith. I’m average talent on guitar, bass, keys, drums and my vocal range is limited. Open to collaborating on words, lyrcs, melodies or to auditioning vocalists who can bring new relevance to the songs. Naturally I’m willing to do the same for others. 

In addition to songwriting I’m an ordained minister who has led worship, pastored, taught, and done music ministry outreach in churches and coffeehouses including 24 hour worship services  so I’m open to participating in like events for others within reasonable driving range.

I still have some songs I recorded 10-15 years ago on soundclick in case anyone wants to peruse them. There is no charge to download, I never sell ministry though at rare times allow people to make a donation if they truly feel so led to defray costs of travel and recording but never to download my online music.

Rev Bill,

Https://Www.reverendbillandfriends.com will redirect you to my soundclick page

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Smile FOREVER GREAT
Posted by: gruvEdude - 10-15-2017, 07:38 AM - Forum: Lyric Critiques - No Replies

FOREVER GREAT
 
My God and Lord, beyond my comprehension,
You made a plan to glorify your Name.
It's bad for me, when I shall stray and wander.
But even so, you love me just the same.


Chorus:
Forever great, your wisdom is supreme.
How could you choose, a child like me?
Forever great, your wisdom is supreme.
The Lamb of God, the Lamb of God.

The only way, oh yes, there is no other;
Not anyone, nor an imperfect me.
Not works but faith, will bring us your salvation.
So let us boast for all eternity.

Good news to share, You give to me that honor.
The first step's hard, but what a joy I'll see
When I proclaim, that You intend,
It's more like You, that You want us to be.

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  Best Options for a treating a home or project Studio Room
Posted by: gdball - 10-13-2017, 05:09 PM - Forum: Recording Help and Tips - Replies (2)

For what it’s worth:  My recording space has changed significantly, opening up all those questions about speaker placement, room treatment, etc. that I hadn’t thought about in a while.
 
I’m pretty sure you do the same kind of research and searching that I do, but the link below was new to me.   To summarize it for you, a team of university students at Worcester Polytechnic Institute took on a project to:

“…demonstrate cost effective methods of acoustic treatment for independent and at-home recording artists that they could easily incorporate in their space. It is essential that the report focus on spending as little money as possible in order to align itself with the position an at-home recording artist would find themselves in ...

One reason I’m writing here is that I was surprised at some of their findings, I had accepted the common view that broadband absorption or Bass Traps were the best approach – and being quite wrong according to this study.  Being as they put it “… with little effect.”
 
They agree that subjectively the character of the room changed a bit. But did it improve the frequency response of the room to give you a more accurate environment for judging the quality of a mix at the listening position?  Their answer was no.

“None of our absorption materials made a great impact on the absorption properties of the rooms. Using more expensive commercial equipment is not inherently better than less expensive fabric, plywood floorboards, etc. In fact neither the commercial material, fabric, floor boards, or our bass traps did anything to alter the frequency response of the room dramatically.”

What did work dramatically according to the study, was the Cardas method of placing speakers. For myself I’ve been careful in the measurement and placement of my Nearfields before, but mostly with the intent to avoid the worst room nodes. The Cardas method relies on different math to use nodes to its advantage.

Anyway, thought it would be an interesting and useful conversation…. Here is the link

https://web.wpi.edu/Pubs/E-project/Avail...014-15.pdf

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  look to the east
Posted by: BKCooper - 10-12-2017, 09:22 AM - Forum: Lyric Critiques - Replies (2)

Here is a little something for y'alls critiquing. 


Chorus:
 look to the east
and watch the clouds
for they soon will be parted.
The son of  man is coming back
to finish what He started. 
(Repeat  chorus)

Verse one:
when the morning star rises,
and the dawn breaks bright and fair.
The clouds will be rolled back as a scroll 
and reveal him standing there.
Even before we see Him ,
in the twinkling of an eye. 
We shall go to meet him
 and take that heavenly ride. 

Chorus againx2

Brothers and sisters
I have something to say.
You better get ready
cause Jesus is on his way.
And how will he find you 
upon His return?
 will you be standing around 
or will you be hard at work?

Chorus again x2

That is pretty much it. What it sound like, in my head is a bluegrass/ country or even southern rock style. I could possibly throw down a scratch vocal if any one would like me to.

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  It's been years
Posted by: gruvEdude - 10-11-2017, 09:00 PM - Forum: Hello My Name is... - Replies (1)

Hello CSN friends!

Since the server crashed a long time ago, I haven't appeared at CSN. I would like CSN links to my lyrics, and few tunes that Jesus gave to me.

I do remember Beagle, and hope to see others that I knew before, as well as those that have joined since!

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  Follow Him
Posted by: novice62 - 10-11-2017, 08:46 AM - Forum: Song Critiques - No Replies

All:  Here's one for your critiques and suggestions on how to improve it.  Thank you.  Neil

https://www.soundclick.com/html5/v3/play...41581&q=hi


Follow Him

Word/Music:  me
 
V1
 
If you will follow Jesus Christ
You will never walk in darkness
Let God's new day end your night
Follow the Light
He’s the Light of Life
 
V2
 
If you want to follow Him
Choosing to be his disciple
You must turn from all your ways
Pick up your cross
Pick up your cross each day
 
Instrumental solo / Bridge
 
V3
 
If you will serve Him, follow Him
Where He is His servant will be
There will be blessings in return
God honors all
God honors all who serve
 
Tag:
 
God honors all
God honors all who serve

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  Holy War
Posted by: robsie - 10-10-2017, 05:03 PM - Forum: Song Critiques - Replies (1)

Dear friends,

I've posted another song for you to enjoy, having taken into account previous comments and suggestions. I hope you enjoy it.

Have a blessed week. 

Robyn


https://soundcloud.com/robyn-herselman/holy-war

Holy War

You speak and it is
You touch and we heal
You breathe and we are
But the world doesn't see Your heart

It's a holy war,  it's a holy war
But the battle's already won
the victory's Yours

You love and we live
You give and we're free
You save and we're forever Yours
What will it take for the world to believe

It's a holy war,  it's a holy war
But the battle's already won
the victory's Yours

You are worthy of every honour x 4

It's a holy war,  it's a holy war
But the battle's already won
the victory's Yours

You speak and it is
You touch and we heal
You breathe and we are
But the world doesn't see your heart

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